Example
Owed Coin Recall
A sorcerer marks a spirit with a debt; when the spirit breaks the spoken terms, the mark pulls it back.
A thin brass coin of light spins once between the sorcerer's fingers, then sinks into the spirit's chest like a slow pin.
How it works
- The user speaks a debt out loud, naming a number of favors owed and a time limit, and touches the spirit to set the mark.
- The mark lasts one hour or until the debt is paid; while marked, the spirit cannot move more than twelve steps from where the mark was set.
- The user cannot mark a spirit that has never spoken a promise, broken a word, or accepted a gift; the debt must be real.
- Weakness
- If the spirit pays the debt before the limit, the mark snaps back and the user loses their voice for ten minutes, leaving them unable to renew marks or give orders.
- Cost
- Each mark drains the user's sense of balance for an hour afterward, making stairs, ledges, and running fights treacherous.
Techniques
- 1
Small Owed Kindness. The user gives a spirit a tiny real gift, like a coin or a bite of food, then marks the debt of thanks; the spirit cannot flee without stumbling back within twelve steps.
- 2
Repeated Word Snare. The user repeats a promise the spirit already broke once, forcing the spirit to freeze for three heartbeats every time it tries to break it again.
- 3
Debt Transfer. When two marked spirits stand near each other, the user merges their debts into one, doubling the pull on one and freeing the other from panic.
Awakening
They were counting brass coins on a folding table, half listening to a neighbor complain about a borrowed kettle never returned. When they said the word 'owed' out loud, a pale mark crawled across the kettle's metal and the neighbor went quiet, staring at their own hands. The room smelled of rain and old pennies, and they knew the debt had always been a kind of rope.